Nellie I probably over-paragraph stuff too, in some people's opinion.
I hesitate to make any more comments and annoy those who think it is pedantic and nitpicking, but it is much easier to get the meaning of a post if it is broken up into manageable chunks. It does not have to be all multi-syllable words and perfect spelling and punctuation to be readable,but spacing it out does help.
I remember a while ago (about six months? maybe more) someone suddenly appeared on a thread with very strong opinions, who posted a message about as long as my unpunctuated and rambling example. She clearly felt very strongly, but the post was wasted.
Some of it was straight from Wikipedia, but cut out in the middle of a sentence and dropped in at random. It was as though he/she had had a mind packed full of unconnected thoughts, and had used a thesaurus and Google to find posh words that seemed to convey them - except that nothing was quite right and the meaning was all mixed up. It would have been better to use words that came naturally.
When asked to make it clearer, he/she flew into a rage and said more or less that we were all too stupid to understand these higher thoughts.