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Namsnanny Mon 09-Dec-19 14:50:55

* Minty's* ... very positive and kind thread offering to put messages on a Christmas tree got me thinking.

Here are some thoughts.

If my love had wings it would fly free
It's dammed as a river searching for the sea

Restlessly roving the winter hills
Hiding in the echoing valley chills

Hopeless monotony of the goldfish bowl
Silently shredding and tearing the soul

Still my heart beats and so does yours
Until it stops my love endures

Would any one else like to put their feelings down?

NotTooOld Mon 09-Dec-19 16:32:49

'Hopeless monotony of the goldfish bowl........' lovely line that, Namsnanny.

Namsnanny Mon 09-Dec-19 20:51:05

So sweet of you to comment NotTooOld smile

As you can tell I'm not a writer, but it is lovely to get the emotions out and down on paper!!