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The Seven Ages of Woman

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MawBroon Sun 19-Nov-17 22:08:59

The seven ages of woman
I
Swathed in pink, her father’s joy
Though mummy secretly wanted a boy
Her early years, with teddies, dollies
And tiny mini shopping trolleys
Did they define her path for life,
Schoolgirl, teenager, career girl, wife?
II
And thence to school where childhood’ toys
She finds replaced by <whisper>BOYS
Embarking on her teenage years
With body image, worries, fears
III
The years tick on, she finds a job
She shares a flat, the boy’s a slob
But after many a tedious night
At last she finds her Mr Right
She is a bride with all that brings.
The wedding dress, the flowers, the rings
Her father walks her down the aisle, her mum in peach can risk a smile
Their little girl at last a wife, the main ambition of her life
IV
New wife, young mum, her life seems set
To follow that of others yet
The joy of children soon outweighs the memories of carefree days.
Her sleepless nights not out at clubs or parties or at bars or pubs
But still the wife, the mum sees how her parents fears for her are now Transferred to those most precious gifts, if only Dad would take his shifts.
V
The empty nester may feel spare
No mess to clear, no car to share
But still she knows her role must change
So committees she will now arrange.
There’s golf, Pilates, Zumba, t’ai chi
To pass the time, coffee, lunch and tea.
VI
But then her focus moves
To tiny babes again, she loves them with a passion warm
She has not felt since hers were born.
Once more her house with laughter rings and Lego bricks and plastic things Adorn her carpet, does she care? Of course not, the DGC were there.
VII
But hark the life clock still is ticking,
Perhaps her husband may have sickened
And one day she awakes alone
Bewildered where the years have gone.
No longer lithe, no longer busy
She easily gets in a tizzy
Her children say “ to save a fuss, You really need to stay with us.”
The circle of life begins to close
She sighs and thinks of all of those
who loved her then, whom she has loved
And will they meet again above?
They live on in her children’s genes, their daughters, sons.

She sighs and smiles
Her job is done.

goldengirl Mon 20-Nov-17 10:21:04

That is just lovely

silverlining48 Mon 20-Nov-17 10:27:21

Very much enjoyed reading this. Well done maw. It Reminded me a bit of the poem by an anonymous author about an elderly lady in hospital which was called something like ‘nurse, see-me’. It always makes me cry.

knspol Mon 20-Nov-17 10:34:54

So very true and so moving. What a talent!

Squiffy Mon 20-Nov-17 10:43:12

So moving Maw and sums it up so eloquently.

Shesanana Mon 20-Nov-17 10:45:38

How lovely. Yes brought a tear to my eye!

mymadeupname Mon 20-Nov-17 10:54:29

A lovely poem. Made me go all warm and teary.

hapgran Mon 20-Nov-17 11:01:28

Amazing and so true.

Kennedy Mon 20-Nov-17 11:01:37

Love this poem. It just about sums up a woman's life.
Well done.

mrshat Mon 20-Nov-17 11:16:53

Beautiful. Thank you.

Misha14 Mon 20-Nov-17 11:20:39

What a lovely thing to share. Thank you, you've made my day.

Bathsheba Mon 20-Nov-17 11:22:33

So beautifully expressed Maw - you really do have talent and, as someone said upthread, this should be picked up by a newspaper!

gillgran Mon 20-Nov-17 11:29:55

I agree with all the other GN's. How lovely it is of you to share with us, Thank you

jollyg Mon 20-Nov-17 11:33:45

Daily Mail? perhaps? Its worth more than that.

schnackie Mon 20-Nov-17 11:35:01

What a beautiful poem! Thank you so much xx

Elenkalubleton Mon 20-Nov-17 11:35:26

I have a lump in my throat reading this,beautiful,well expressed.

Milly Mon 20-Nov-17 11:38:46

Beautiful, brilliant, lovely, all the words have been used up and I agree with all of them, thank you for that Mawbroon

Crafting Mon 20-Nov-17 11:53:51

You write lovely poems maw. Sometimes funny, sometimes sad, always thought provoking. Really like this one ?

luluaugust Mon 20-Nov-17 11:54:15

Beautiful poem thank you

meandashy Mon 20-Nov-17 12:05:29

Maw thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. It has reduced me to tears (probably well needed!)
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Sar53 Mon 20-Nov-17 12:18:56

How moving, what a lovely poem.

HillyN Mon 20-Nov-17 12:40:33

A truly wonderful poem. You obviously have a great talent for poetry- have you ever thought about publishing? Thank you so much for sharing with us.

sarahellenwhitney Mon 20-Nov-17 12:45:13

Oh for a world that perfect.sunshine

Greengage Mon 20-Nov-17 13:39:23

Strangely my life has not quite followed this pattern. My husband died prior to Stage V the empty nest, though my children were already adults. Am now at Stage VI plus a new man has entered my life! So currently avoiding Stage VII !!!

Caro1954 Mon 20-Nov-17 13:40:20

Only got two lines in before I had to stop, Maw ... But I will go back later (feeling a bit raw at the moment) and finish. Thankyou so much. flowers

Persistentdonor Mon 20-Nov-17 13:50:29

Gosh that is so moving!
I wonder if it all gushed out of your pen, or you had to agonise over it Maw?
Perhaps you should think about making a book of poems that your DC and DGC would surely treasure.
sunshine