MawBe
ElderlyPerson
Into a forest with the Past Historic!
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The thing is EP, I would not use the PH. in some of the instances you quote.
It is used primarily for very formal writing - most people would use the passé composé and the imperfect tenses.
Secondly if you are describing ongoing events in the past such as the sun shone/was shining, I was happy or whatever, you would use the imperfect.
Similarly for repeated actions in the past - he went to the bakers every day.
I think you enjoy intellectual exercises, like this one, your story using past tenses, but with respect, it may be a bit of a turn off for those who just want to chat to brush up their French.
Thank you for your comments.
So in what I wrote is it just the sun shining through the trees that needs the imperfect?
> I think you enjoy intellectual exercises, like this one, your story using past tenses ...
Yes, indeed. I was in school in the 1960s and we were taught the past historic. I think that I did it alright. The subjunctive I got in a muddle. So now, I would like to explore both the past historic and try to learn the subjunctive.
Is there a subjunctive part for the past historic?
You mention using the imperfect.
I either never knew, or had forgotten, that one can mix the past historic with the imperfect in one story, so I have learned that this morning. Thank you.
One thing, as Antonia introduced the story including the concept of it being a dream, it occurs to me that if, say, that the story goes on to meet three other unicorns (as a way to use third person plural past historic in the story - the three unicorns looked at us) and, as it is a dream, one of the unicorns speaks, in which tense should what the unicorn says be please, given that the story is overall in the past historic.
As in, she said " (whatever) ".
> .., but with respect, it may be a bit of a turn off for those who just want to chat to brush up their French.
Well, if someone 'just' wants one part, fine. But some of us might like various aspects of French.
Chat in French in the café, explore the past historic in traditional style in the story thread and its garden thread.
Chat about French in English in this thread.
Other threads could be available for other aspects of French.
The comment that the story is like 18th Century writing pleased me.
If it were typeset in a font of that era, that could look good.