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One of my poems

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Purplepixie Tue 10-Mar-26 23:28:45

Classroom

The rain battered on the classroom windows that cold winters day
Our English teacher kept us transfixed with plenty to say

Drifting off with topics of homework essays whirling in my head
Longing for home time and pyjamas on and away to my bed

The bell screeched out in those corridors of learning and doom
We all bustled out onto the darkened streets of coal dust and gloom

Dreams of the future were never far from our adolescent minds
But the winds of the future in this pit village could be unkind

Those homework essays always carried me away on dove like clouds
Wrapped up in hypothetical words which could quickly change to shrouds

I’d gaze out of the window at the moon as a cloud rushed by
All these chapters in our lives hurtled away in the blink of an watery eye

Gather up the words and drink in the atmosphere of life
Spread them on the page and level them with a political knife

The future is yours if only the authoritarian minds didn’t strangle your life
Away back to that warm bedroom and dreaming of days without any strife

Thank you for reading
I grew up in a mining village in the North East (UK)

Sarnia Wed 11-Mar-26 08:44:12

This sounds familiar. Did you post this a few weeks ago?

RosiesMawagain Wed 11-Mar-26 08:44:17

Déja vu?

Purplepixie Wed 11-Mar-26 12:13:11

Sorry. Yes! It’s an age thing.

Sarnia Wed 11-Mar-26 15:37:06

Purplepixie

Sorry. Yes! It’s an age thing.

Join the club grin

Purplepixie Wed 11-Mar-26 17:37:21

I think I’m the founder member! 😝

Whiff Fri 13-Mar-26 14:43:22

Purplepixie love your poem . I am nearly 68 and things you wrote resonate with me ..🌟

Norah Fri 13-Mar-26 15:56:38

Very nice.

Purplepixie Fri 13-Mar-26 18:53:06

Thank you all so much. I’m 73.

crazyH Fri 13-Mar-26 19:09:56

Very evocative Purplepixie - although I didn’t grow up in a mining village, my husband worked in one and we temporarily lived there. The miners and their families, were some of the sweetest and most welcoming people I know.

Bellanonna Fri 13-Mar-26 19:13:14

Always happy to read it twice , PP. I’m your fellow founder member by the way!🙂

Purplepixie Sat 14-Mar-26 23:41:10

Thank you. 🙏