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My gentler poems.

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Ian42 Fri 01-Jun-12 15:58:54

Here I will post my gentler poems, feel free to comment for good or bad.

A rural landscape.

A rural landscape,
thatched cottages,
harvesting in the fields,
swifts and martins
swooping and sweeping,
spiralling across the sky
swept by sporadic clouds.

A farmer leans on a gate,
viewing all his surrounds,
a couple of ramblers
stroll leisurely along
man-made paths,
a herd of cows nuzzling
each other or grazing lazily.

At dusk the cows head
into the farmyard amongst
the quacking ducks
and hissing geese
avoiding the pond
the farmyard equipment,
the pigs munching on odds and ends.

Finally darkness descends
and the stars and moon shine
across the rural landscape
which is so different
from the daytime busyness,
it is so relaxed and silent
as lights twinkle all around.

jeni Sun 03-Jun-12 22:12:50

Excellent!

Ariadne Sun 03-Jun-12 22:07:12

You do not know me;
You never will.
And so I wait
Quiet and still.
I may laugh,
And I may cry,
But I will love you
And you won't know why.
Still I'll stay
And still I'll smile
So you might know me
For a while.

jeni Sun 03-Jun-12 21:00:14

Not bad!smile

Ian42 Sun 03-Jun-12 20:33:40

Here is another one, hope you like it?

A View from a Rock.

I sit on a rock
on a mountain
contemplating
what I can see
an ocean is visible
cool and inviting
a sandy desert
hot and uninviting
various trees
a roaring river
to waterfalls cascading.

Fervent musing
all very amusing
as the rock becomes
uncomfortably hard
as I focus on
the landscape
surrounding all
I observe. Fascinated
deliberately
meandering
over the open spaces.

Night falls
the sunsets
I can hardly see now
all that I saw
earlier in the day;
better move on
before I lose my
way. Home from
this rock where
pondering and
not wandering
from all that I
surveyed.

jeni Sat 02-Jun-12 20:17:52

Well tried, young man.
I'll help you if I can
But I feel that my feet
would land me on my seat
And I don't like bruising
To my fan(ny)

Ian42 Sat 02-Jun-12 20:08:32

Actually I fell over
two left feet hover
from shining floor
must get out the door.

smile envy smile

greenmossgiel Sat 02-Jun-12 20:03:35

grin

gracesmum has summed it up -
And Ian, overwhelmed,
Sits out this dance
And looks askance
At Ariadne sweetly smiling!

Ella46 Sat 02-Jun-12 19:52:14

grin

jeni Sat 02-Jun-12 19:50:11

grin

gracesmum Sat 02-Jun-12 19:49:25

our dancing years behind us
we'll sit and reminisce
of gallant swains and maidens shy
and ariadne taking the p*

jeni Sat 02-Jun-12 19:19:49

And if any man
Should ask us for a dance
We'll smile and sweetly say
'sir, I have to answer "nay"'
For. Dancing with a granny
Is a gallop, not a prance

Next?

greenmossgiel Sat 02-Jun-12 19:15:04

Ah!

A ballroom on a Borum?
Can we dance with much decorum?
If so, we'll surely floor 'em
As across those boards we prance!

grin

Ian42 Sat 02-Jun-12 17:11:53

Thankyou for the dance
it was a brief-like chance
encountered on a forum
yet felt like a ballroom.

wink

greenmossgiel Sat 02-Jun-12 17:07:16

Then I'll ask you to dance, Ian42!
In the form of a waltz (one, two, three)

"Shall we dance,
Take the floor?
Shall we waltz out the door?
Both left feet trip no more?
Shall we dance?

smile

Ian42 Sat 02-Jun-12 15:11:50

When it comes to dancing I have two left feet.

j04 Sat 02-Jun-12 14:34:22

You should never miss a chance to go for a dance. You never know what could come of it! (if you're young, free and single, I guess) grin

soop Sat 02-Jun-12 14:07:51

Ian42 grin

Ian42 Sat 02-Jun-12 14:02:46

Here is a limerick that I have penned myself.

There once was a poet from Aylesbury
Whos words were made very clearly
He missed his great chance
To go for a dance
When everybody said oh really.

soop Sat 02-Jun-12 12:29:56

green ...very witty grin

soop Sat 02-Jun-12 12:25:57

Ian42...Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry with us. You have a very sensitive way with words. Keep writing! smile

Ariadne Sat 02-Jun-12 11:49:58

green grin

greenmossgiel Sat 02-Jun-12 11:33:04

Perhaps I was trying to be smart there, as well. Sorry, Ian42. sad
Here's a daft limerick that I made up to lighten things:

There was a young man from Arbroath
Who found himself terribly loath
To tie up his laces
Before taking long paces
And was berated for being a sloth.

grin

Ariadne Sat 02-Jun-12 10:48:20

Anagram you are right; have PMd Ian. Knew it was wrong! Thank you reminding me wiithout rancour!

Ariadne Sat 02-Jun-12 09:52:19

Rarely do it, unlike some. Anyway, had enough of this.

Anagram Fri 01-Jun-12 22:17:29

It wasn't very kind.