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Scarlet21 Mon 21-Oct-13 21:59:06

I danced in the delicate Springtime,
Wheeled as an untrammelled kite,
I sported in wanton Summer
In strident, mid-day light.
Overbright summer betrayed me,
Shamelessly lingering on.
Clamouring colour unmade me,
Clinging to youth that had gone.

I skipped through the fresh-felt morning,
And bloomed in the afternoon
Give me now an evening,
One gliding, tiding moon.
The night must not come quickly,
Swept unawares, away,
Then I will yield, 'Come night...
I have lived the lovely day'.

I need the soft touches of Autumn,
A chance to become serene,
Out of the glare of the white light
Into the cool of the green.
When limbs that are wearied by frenzy,
Can rest before they are stilled
And cheeks that are hot from the riot
Can cool before they are chilled.

When sweet melancholy enfolds me
And there is woodsmoke tang on the air,
The russety smell of the leaf-drop
Can soothe away despair.
When misty mornings muffle
A dim and muted sun
Which lights upon nothing vibrant,
But harmony, brown and dun.

The long night of Winter is coming
And I will not try to evade
But I ask for one lingering moment
In the calm of the Autumn shade.

merlotgran Mon 21-Oct-13 22:05:33

This is so beautiful, Scarlet21. I've read it four times while DH is ranting at the telly about something of no importance.

Thank you for a moment of calm.

Galen Mon 21-Oct-13 22:08:54

Wonderful

annodomini Mon 21-Oct-13 22:13:48

What a perfect poem. smile

LizG Mon 21-Oct-13 22:34:49

A lovely poem, thank you flowers

Sook Mon 21-Oct-13 22:37:21

What a beautiful poem Scarlet21 I could feel that fresh-felt morning and smell the woodsmoke.

Lona Mon 21-Oct-13 23:06:36

Beautiful and evocative.

Flowerofthewest Mon 21-Oct-13 23:31:59

Beautiful thank you x

ffinnochio Tue 22-Oct-13 07:33:31

Lovely. smile

absent Tue 22-Oct-13 08:06:45

Food for thought – in a wonderfully lyrical way.

Scarlet21 Tue 22-Oct-13 08:12:34

Thank you all - I am glad you like my poem. smile

Aka Tue 22-Oct-13 08:27:12

Message withdrawn at poster's request.

Scarlet21 Tue 22-Oct-13 09:06:30

confused I hoped for some poems about Autumn, as it seems seasonal.

Aka Tue 22-Oct-13 09:21:43

This is a sort of Halloween poem.

Aka Tue 22-Oct-13 09:22:22

Please GNHQ will you delete my poem?

Aka Tue 22-Oct-13 09:28:24

OK I've reported my own post.

Berylmaudie Tue 22-Oct-13 09:44:06

I think the spider poem is very Autumnish. There are such a lot of spiders around in the Autumn.

The original poem was just a little bit bloody miserable. It was very poetic though. [smile}

glassortwo Tue 22-Oct-13 09:58:02

I love them both!

Berylmaudie Tue 22-Oct-13 10:27:24

I do not think the spider one is about Halloween. Could aga explain that please. [ smile ]

Berylmaudie Tue 22-Oct-13 10:30:04

Why has that spider poem gone? I liked it. [ sad]

Nonu Tue 22-Oct-13 12:12:06

AKA I can"t read your poem as you have had it deleted , -- shame ! Was it a good one ? x

Aka Tue 22-Oct-13 12:22:07

Will repost then but on a more appropriate thread.

Aka Tue 22-Oct-13 12:24:28

On the Spiders Thread.

Scarlet21 Tue 22-Oct-13 12:35:22

I am sorry somebody found my poem 'bloody miserable' - perhaps I should not post any more as I usually get inspired by serious subjects. I had no objection to the spider poem, I just thought that a thread called 'Autumn' might attract some more poems about Autumn.

Berylmaudie Tue 22-Oct-13 12:37:32

only a little bit. It was very nice.