My 12 year old granddaughter wrote this in response to a “story” about kindness. I thought it was beautiful
“Best Shortbread in Scotland”
Tamzin Parker was a bright, bubbly 26-year-old woman who ran a café in her home village of Cullen. Situated on the North Sea coast of Scotland her café overlooked the beach. As she was cleaning up crumbs from her last customer, she looked around at the empty tables and sighed. At lunchtime on a lovely, warm spring morning, she would usually expect more customers but the covid-19 pandemic had taken its toll. With people staying at home more often and others working from home, many of her regulars had stopped spending their money on her lunchtime specials.
Tamzin slid open the till drawer and scooped out today’s takings. Fifteen pounds and 27 pence was not going to pay her bills.
The café bell rang as a man wearing a blue tailored suit entered. Tamzin couldn’t help but notice his rather expensive looking car parked in the bay outside.
“Can I have a large coffee and one of your shortbread please?” The man asked kindly. Tamzin prepared his order and brought it over to the table in the window, where he had chosen to sit.
The man smiled and said “I love shortbread and I hear that you do the best in all of Scotland”
Tamzin smiled and replied “Aye, we do a great shortbread in here but you should enjoy that piece because I am going to be closing on Friday………….. This pandemic has really affected my business. Its sad but there you go”
The man looked thoughtful and replied “I’m sorry to hear this, maybe things will get better for you soon?”
Tamzin smiled at him and said “as my mum always used to say, what will be will be”
The man turned his attention to the shortbread and polished off every last crumb before drinking down his coffee. He opened up his briefcase, and shuffled about some papers before busily scribbling something down. “can I have the bill please?”
Tamzin passed him the bill, placing it next to his empty coffee cup and next to this she placed a paper bag with a rectangular object inside. “Have a free piece of shortbread on me, to take home. And never forget the café that sold the best shortbread in Scotland” she chuckled.
The Man stood up and after collecting his belongings, waved goodbye “thanks for everything” he said.
Tamzin went to collect the bill and dirty dishes. As she scooped up the money left on the table, something caught her eye. On the table was a Cheque and as she read it, her eyes widened. It was for her!! The Cheque was made out to Miss Tamzin Parker and was signed by a Mr. Lachlan Gibson. Lachlan Gibson? Where had she heard that name before?…..
Tamzin searched her memories and it didn’t take her long to recall his face. Lachlan had been a child at her school. They were just 8 years old when Lachlan moved from a school in Glasgow and joined their class. Lachlan was a small boy with timid brown eyes and messy dark hair that looked as though he had never thought to brush it. Tamzin had remembered that Lachlan had been sat next to her at lunchtimes in the school canteen. He seemed to bring very little in the way of food with him to the canteen. He would finish off his sandwich and still seemed hungry. His eyes would follow every bite that Tamzin took. Tamzin was only 8 years old yet her heart told her that she felt sorry for Lachlan. Each day she would push some of her lunch over towards him. A banana, an orange, a yogurt but Lachlan was never happier as when she would halve her shortbread and give him the biggest half. “I make this with my mum” she said.
Lachlan’s family had been struggling since his dad got fired from his job but even as things did improve for them Tamzin would always bring shortbread to share.
Tamzin held the cheque in her hands. There was more than enough to pay her bills and to keep her café running and to maybe make it through the pandemic. Under the empty coffee cup was a piece of folded paper. It read
“To Tamzin
Thank you for the best shortbread in Scotland.
This is for all of the times you let me have the bigger half.
Kindness never goes unnoticed!
Your old friend, Lachlan”
Tamzin stood in disbelief, holding the cheque feeling excited and overwhelmed all at the same time. Could this really be happening? Had her business really been saved? This is exactly what happened and Tamzin would go on to serve many a shortbread for years to come.
Her favorite customer was the man in the blue suit who always got the bigger half.
By Emma-lee Loveday
Christ the King school- 7D