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thatbags Sat 09-Nov-13 17:14:55

My effort today:

Sunlit snow on hills
Bracken shadowy and bright
As the sun falls west

How to:

merlotgran Sat 09-Nov-13 17:43:24

Remembrance is ours
Borne on an autumn breeze
As the leaves rustle

merlotgran Sat 09-Nov-13 17:46:58

That should be, Carried on an autumn breeze.

I should have previewed.

LizG Sat 09-Nov-13 19:32:51

Swirling, coughing wind;
Groaning Maple uprooted.
Winter took its toll.

Ariadne Sat 09-Nov-13 19:49:16


My heart full of joy-
My family together.
Completed at last.

Marelli Sat 09-Nov-13 20:10:40

Oak tree bare of leaves
From its branches the pale doves
Flee as hawks settle.

Agus Sat 09-Nov-13 20:29:52

The leaves begin to soften
The frost disappears
Another raindrop falls

thatbags Sun 10-Nov-13 13:53:35

Cubs and scouts and flags
Jackdaw caws through the silence,
Trumpet sounds Last Post.

lucid Mon 11-Nov-13 11:31:39

Ethereal drift
Obscuring the horizon
Mistiness rolls in

ffinnochio Mon 11-Nov-13 11:36:46


gracesmum Mon 11-Nov-13 11:44:22

These are lovely!I don't know if this is actually a haiku but a short poem by Alan Spence from his book "Glasgow Zen":

"scratchin maself
och aye
no deid yet"

Agus Mon 11-Nov-13 12:10:37

Grey skies part
Spirits lifted
A rainbow

ffinnochio Mon 11-Nov-13 12:53:16

gracesmum - Glasgow Zen - A new one for me. Off to google more...... smile