The results from our eminent judge (who very much enjoyed all of the poems) are now in.
HIGHLY COMMENDED
My Beautiful Girl by RockNanny
Miriam says "I liked the rhythm and rhyme in this poem."
My beautiful girl makes my heart swell with pride
I hug her and feel very thankful inside
Her firm, rounded belly is pressing on me
We smile as we share a group hug, just us three
My daughter, her own little daughter, and me.
A Haiku for my beloved grandaughter adopted age 4 by Angel2
She came like a breeze
Shaking and snaking the grass
And lifted our hearts
Miriam's comment: "a lovely celebration of an adopted grandchild. Strong middle line."
And now...drum roll...the WINNER. Over to Miriam...
"I award first prize to Gally for her poem She lies there... Gally's poem stood out as both a lovely picture of a grandchild and a reflection of a kind of grief that all mothers will recognise. The poem has a strong, clear voice and there is an effective use of rhyme in the third and fifth lines. Well done Gally. Lovely poem."
She lies there, this tiny perfect thing - the image of my child -
Sleeping, cheeks soft and pale, her breath but a butterfly wing
No sound save the fall of my tears,
Grieving in vain for her mother's childhood,
times gone, the passing years.......
So
to you Gally and your prize will be on its way very soon. Thanks so much to everyone who entered - we loved reading every single entry and look forward to doing it again soon.