icequeen
How did you come up with James as character? He is completely utterly soulless. I just could not fathom how someone as supposedly clever as Diana could fall for him so easily?
I loved your portrayal of Diana's parents' relationship by the way. It was really warm, and with the troubles they had after Johnnie was killed, very realistic.
James, as you know, is a complete psychopath; a psychopathic Spitfire pilot. But as I've said, he's highly intelligent and with natural charm. They're usually the most dangerous psychopaths of all.
We have a close friend who's a highly regarded psychiatrist and he was very useful in fleshing out psychopathic characteristics.
Why does Diana fall for him? Well for a start, everyone else does - her brother John; her parents. But more than that, when I described Diana's inner character, I divide her into three personalities. Academic Diana, maternal Diana, and the secret, quivering, carnal, erotic Diana. That's the match to James's litmus strip - she is hugely sexually attracted to him at a very fundamental level. That's why later, despite all the difficulties, problems and dangers, she falls for him all over again. Their relationship appears quite sophisticated and romantic, but for her, at bottom, it's deeply sexual. I hope that comes over.