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We all write this poem

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Alexa Tue 19-Dec-17 00:53:20

All you do is complete the verse. Everybody can have a go.

"I built a castle on the moor
And all its doors were green

Greyduster Tue 19-Dec-17 07:11:21

I built a castle on the moor
And all its doors were green
My dreams were ashes on the floor
But hope lived there, unseen.

NanKate Tue 19-Dec-17 07:35:42

I built a castle on the moor
And all its doors were green
My dreams were ashes on the floor
But hope lived there, unseen

I prayed for peace to come to me
And thought of golden days

loopyloo Tue 19-Dec-17 07:46:28

I helped my friends in time of need
,joy came in other ways.

Maggiemaybe Tue 19-Dec-17 08:17:48

When lonely nights were long and cold
And sleep was hard to find

downtoearth Tue 19-Dec-17 08:21:25

Peace came to me
And soothed my troubled mind

Christinefrance Tue 19-Dec-17 08:38:34

At last I slept and dreamed
Of Christmas and the star which shined

Greyduster Tue 19-Dec-17 08:55:20

Over a Bethlehem stable
Where lay a child divine

Teetime Tue 19-Dec-17 09:05:04

I dreamed the world was free from strife
And people lived in peace

goldengirl Tue 19-Dec-17 11:36:55

If only this were true in life
How can we make wars cease?

Alexa Tue 19-Dec-17 11:41:54

I dreamed the world was free from strife
And people lived in peace
And then I woke and found a life
Of trial not of ease.

The driving rain and searing sun
Outside my castle's doors
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?

Lindylo Tue 19-Dec-17 11:45:37

The driving rain and searing sun
Outside my castle's doors

The lightening frightens everyone
The thunder loudly roars

Alexa Tue 19-Dec-17 11:52:19

If only this were true in life
How can we make wars cease?
Ah Goldengirl, my inner strife
Might close my door to peace.

Alexa Tue 19-Dec-17 12:04:21

The driving rain and searing sun
Outside my castle's doors
The lightning frightens everyone
The thunder loudly roars.

Says Lindylo, who knows so well
(I guess this must be so)
That tempests though they cause us hell
Can also make us grow.

My castle held my lady safe
She died within the year

Greyduster Tue 19-Dec-17 15:00:38

My castle held my lady safe
She died within the year
Then the walls began to crumble
As did all that I held dear.

Alexa Tue 19-Dec-17 17:07:57

I'd feared, and clung, and built that tower
To keep what I did own

Lindylo Wed 20-Dec-17 11:14:13

To treasure all my worldly goods
The memories I have sown

NotTooOld Wed 20-Dec-17 11:58:40

But worldly goods are transient
And crumble soon to dust

Alexa Wed 20-Dec-17 18:36:26

My worldly goods are dusty trash
And youth I should have spent

(PS thanks to all joiners-in+++)

Alexa Wed 20-Dec-17 18:45:30

My worldly goods are are dusty trash
My youth I should have spent
Spending all my surplus cash
In generous merriment.

Season's greetings !