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I bought a rose.

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stree Sun 30-Sep-18 13:48:47

I bought a rose today, for thee Lass,
chosen with great care
I wanted just the best for thee Lass,
and I saw you in the sunlight: smiling, watching
I saw you standing there.

I bought a rose today, for thee Lass,
I know full well how they lift your heart.
I took my time to bide for the right one
and the beauty of this one, had me start..

I bought a rose today, for thee Lass
Its delicate, its a wonder, perfection stopped yet unstilled..
It’s a delight of a scent from Heaven to you Lass,
My thoughts of it all had my eyes quick tear filled.

I bought a rose today, for thee Lass
Its good and pure and strong
Its just for thee alone Lass, thee alone.
So sure, so straight and much minds me of thee Lass
And its colours and scent are its life, and its song

I bought a rose today, for you Lass,
As I always will every year
And though I have grieved for nigh on twenty,.
its through that rose that chooses me, aye, chooses me, Lass,
That I know You are here.

You chose a rose today Lass
And I held it close and near.
And I wish with all my heart Lass,
Aye all my heart.
I wish that you were here.

JuneS Sat 06-Oct-18 11:19:28

So touching to read. I have a special rose for my husband who I lost 2yrs ago and for each of my much loved pets. Always a lovely reminder when they are in flower.

MissAdventure Sat 06-Oct-18 11:42:49

That's lovely, stree
smile
Hope you'll share some more of your writing.

kittylester Sat 06-Oct-18 14:50:46

Crumbs! That's lovely!

Anniebach Sat 06-Oct-18 15:08:00

My husband always bought me roses. My elder daughter did the same for me after he died. Last year she was too ill to go to the florist so she bought me a silk rose.

Thank you for sharing stree

Patsy70 Sat 06-Oct-18 15:30:15

That is very beautiful.

LadyGracie Sat 06-Oct-18 19:44:17

What a beautiful poem.

I bought roses today for my dear mum who passed 15 years ago tomorrow. They were her favourite flowers.

stree Mon 08-Oct-18 20:40:45

Thank you all for your appreciative words.

I have another flower one you might like to see.

Honeysuckle moment.

Its an evening that the honeysuckle has to itself,
in unexpected corners.
Found still and half sunlit,
pouring itself unexpected, scented, vibrant,
silent.
each moment its own saviour
each instant new with ripplefurled leaf and petal thriving and striving, hearing what we cannot,
Roots in earth, flower in time with the sky.
still holding the secret
the one that we forgot
forgotten time, that we just let slip right by......

MissAdventure Tue 09-Oct-18 17:55:01

smile
Another lovely one, stree
Thank you!

stree Wed 10-Oct-18 12:59:50

Thank you again.
I probably should have sent it on its own thread rather than tagging onto the Rose one.
Flowers get me thinking sometimes.