Stories in Women's Magazines

It’s not just the storyline to be aware of.

When you read the stories take note of how long the sentences are and whether they have clauses. Also how difficult the words are, how many syllables.

It’s true! I was asked to rewrite one of mine mor simply. Liked the story but too many commas??

I agree with the advice about researching your market, in this case the magazine/s you hope to write for. It's absolutely vital. Even a very good story will be rejected if it does not fulfill the particular criteria the fiction editor is looking for. The magazine will know its readers very well, who they are, what they like, possibly even what they eat for breakfast. You don't stand a chance unless your story fits the bill exactly. What Peasblossom says about sentence length, clauses in sentences and commas is perfectly true! I should know, I've been trying (with limited success) for years.

I write for the People's Friend. Their guidelines are crystal clear. The stories have to fit in with the ethos of the publication in general and the contents and layout of each issue in particular. Sometimes the word will go out that they're looking for a particular length of story or a story set at particular time of year. They work many months ahead though.
They have staff who will alter wording as required. Obviously, they expect spelling and grammar to be appropriate. Dialogue matters. It should be realistic. If in doubt read your story aloud to see how it sounds.

....submit a story and test the waters then!

Thanks, Aveline. I've just looked at the PF guidelines and might have a go. Well done for having your own work published.

I tried this a few years ago. I had my stories returned with nice letters, but no thanks. I think it really helps if you have a literary agent. Don't give up though whatever you do. Good luck!

Thank you everyone for taking the time to respond to my query. You have given me lots of good advice that I really appreciate.