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Scarlet21 Mon 21-Oct-13 21:59:06

I danced in the delicate Springtime,
Wheeled as an untrammelled kite,
I sported in wanton Summer
In strident, mid-day light.
Overbright summer betrayed me,
Shamelessly lingering on.
Clamouring colour unmade me,
Clinging to youth that had gone.

I skipped through the fresh-felt morning,
And bloomed in the afternoon
Give me now an evening,
One gliding, tiding moon.
The night must not come quickly,
Swept unawares, away,
Then I will yield, 'Come night...
I have lived the lovely day'.

I need the soft touches of Autumn,
A chance to become serene,
Out of the glare of the white light
Into the cool of the green.
When limbs that are wearied by frenzy,
Can rest before they are stilled
And cheeks that are hot from the riot
Can cool before they are chilled.

When sweet melancholy enfolds me
And there is woodsmoke tang on the air,
The russety smell of the leaf-drop
Can soothe away despair.
When misty mornings muffle
A dim and muted sun
Which lights upon nothing vibrant,
But harmony, brown and dun.

The long night of Winter is coming
And I will not try to evade
But I ask for one lingering moment
In the calm of the Autumn shade.

Scarlet21 Wed 23-Oct-13 12:49:00

ffinoccio- I haven't published any before except for a couple of competitions (which I won!) so I am still at the stage of seeing them as my babies and wanting to defend them. I will try to follow your lead and just 'publish and be damned'.

Tegan Wed 23-Oct-13 12:51:43

gracesmum; methinks you've lost your true vocation in life smile.

janeainsworth Wed 23-Oct-13 12:59:38

Just to be clear, I wasn't classifying beryl's remark as literary criticismhmm

Scarlet21 Wed 23-Oct-13 13:04:14

I appreciate that, jane, and I wouldn't really object to serious suggestions about how I could improve my poems.

thatbags Wed 23-Oct-13 13:09:55

Just to be clear: I read real confusion in Beryl's remarks (she mentioned confusion) and a real apology, so my post was an attempt to smooth the troubled waters a little. An abject failure, it would seem. Hey ho.

galen, the first poem I quoted from is Tithonus. It's miserable allright!

Just to be clear: smile
There is nothing bad-tempered in my posts on this thread.

Tegan Wed 23-Oct-13 13:17:52

I've got shelves full of poetry books inherited from a friend and would love to learn more, although I sometimes wonder if I should pass them on to someone, say a young student, that would really need them. But they're such beautiful books.

soop Wed 23-Oct-13 13:21:15

bags smile

Ariadne Wed 23-Oct-13 13:30:23

Bit late on GN today!

Scarlet that is a beautifully constructed, poignant poem, and I loved it. Some of us do write, and post the occasional poem, and I for one am glad that you did.

annodomini Wed 23-Oct-13 13:46:36

Tegan, the only way to get into poetry is to read it and decide what you like - eventually you can work out why you like it. Your local U3A might have a poetry group you could join. I think ours has, though I have joined enough already, so haven't got into that one.

Tegan Wed 23-Oct-13 13:58:02

The one I've joined hasn't but I'm hoping the Derby one might have.

Scarlet21 Wed 23-Oct-13 14:00:55

I have no wish to argue with any other member, so I will just stick to posting the odd poem.

Scarlet21 Wed 23-Oct-13 14:06:42

Tegan - somebody gave me a book of poems called Palgrave's Golden Treasury when I was about nine and I was hooked! Don't worry if you don't understand every poem - I studied Gerard Manley Hopkins as part of my degree and I really enjoy his work, but there are many parts I don't understand. I just like the sound of the words.
I also enjoy Pam Ayres - a lot of her work is really funny. I have a very wide taste in poetry and I refuse to be limited by what some academic thinks is superior. You have a lot of pleasure ahead of you!

Tegan Wed 23-Oct-13 14:06:49

Please do, Scarlet smile.

Tegan Wed 23-Oct-13 14:28:58

..that was a reply to the one before.....[I think it was Lewis Carroll that started me off; my son loved poetry when he was a child, as well, and I gave my daughter an anthology when she was 18, with the inscrption 'what every 18 year old wants on her 18th birthday'. Start 'em young, I say!]

annodomini Wed 23-Oct-13 14:54:52

One of my most satisfying moments as a teacher was when a mature student came to me at the end of an A-level course to thank me for introducing her to poetry. Tegan, you will probably get more from poetry as an adult than you would have done at school.

Tegan Wed 23-Oct-13 14:59:42

What gets me is the depth to so much poetry even though it's been written by such young people.

Stansgran Wed 23-Oct-13 16:33:13

Keats wrote some good stuff young.

Ariadne Wed 23-Oct-13 16:34:47

Poetry has been my passion throughout my career as an English teacher and now I have time to read more and write more. DD teaches English too, and DGD1 is now in Y13 with English as her best and favourite subject. So, as you can imagine, I am kept well up to date, and it is part of the joy of being with them down here.

kittylester Wed 23-Oct-13 16:47:33

I'm sure someone started a poetry thread a while back where people posted their favourite poems. I really enjoyed that and I don't do poetry! thlgrin

Scarlet21 please don't confine yourself to poetry - join in on other threads too!

Tegan Wed 23-Oct-13 17:15:21

La Belle Dame is my favourite poem; I'm in love with Keats blush.

Ariadne Wed 23-Oct-13 17:19:00

"I have but two thoughts; your beauty and the hour of my death. Would that I could have possession of both in the same moment." (Keats to Fanny) one of my favourite bits of Keats' prose.

I love Keats, prose and poetry, too, Tegan.

Tegan Wed 23-Oct-13 17:31:57

This isn't poetry but something happened last night which made me remember a letter that someone once sent me which started with the lines 'extrasensory is inadequate to describe your vision'. No one has ever written anything to me like that before or since sad. Have you seen 'Bright Star' Ariadne?

gracesmum Wed 23-Oct-13 18:09:55

Reading Sheila Hancock's book "Just Me" and she quotes Joyce Grenfell:

"If I should go before the rest of you
Break not a flower, nor inscribe a stone,
Nor when I'm gone speak in a Sunday voice
But be the usual selves that I have known.
Weep if you must,
Parting is hell,
But life goes on,
So sing as well."

merlotgran Wed 23-Oct-13 18:22:31

I loved Joyce Grenfell.

If any of my lot speak about me in a Sunday voice, I'll come back and haunt them. thlshock

annodomini Wed 23-Oct-13 18:25:28

I loved that book, G'mum. In fact, I have great respect for Sheila Hancock. We have't had her for a web chat, have we?