Calistemon, incorrect. If it were expanded, the section in question might read “should a crime be committed, and should Sergeant Collins manage to apprehend the culprit, it would be very unlikely that the arrest had involved a pursuit on foot.”
Now I’m re reading it , it seems correct. Now I’m certain I’m going mad. Sorry. It is a very long sentence though. Do you think the book is worth a read It’s on special offer today .
It’s the use of ‘ managed’. Should it be manage ? It doesn’t read smoothly to me. I’m being nit picky I suppose . I thought there were several people on here who are very good at grammar and could tell me if it’s right or not? It’s just a little thing but it’s driving me mad.
I tried a sample of Holding by Graham Norton but I couldn’t get my head round the very first sentence which is :
“ It was widely accepted by the residents of Duneen that , should a crime be committed and Sergeant Collins managed to apprehend the culprit , it would be very unlikely that the arrest had involved a pursuit on foot . “
“ managed “ doesn’t sound right to me. Is it right ? Is it a Kindle misprint ? I’ve googled it but no one I can see is querying it . I wondered if anyone has the book or can shed any light on this for me.