I enjoy it too. It brings a sense or immediacy and involves the reader or viewer in the actions and events.
The opening lines of Hilary Mantel’s The Mirror and the Light which begins immediately after the execution of Anne Boleyn:
Once the queen’s head is severed, he walks away. A sharp pang of appetite reminds him that it is time for a second breakfast, or perhaps an early dinner. This morning’s circumstances are new and there are no rules to guide us. The witnesses who have knelt for the passing of the soul, stand up and put on their hats. Under the hats, their faces are stunned.
But then he turns back, to say a word of thanks to the executioner …
The small body lies on the scaffold where it has fallen; belly down, hands outstretched, it swims in a pool of crimson, the blood seeping between the the planks.
Compare:
Once the queen’s head was severed, he walked away. A sharp pang of appetite reminded him that it was time for a second breakfast, or perhaps an early dinner. That morning’s circumstances were new and there were no rules to guide them. The witnesses who had knelt for the passing of the soul, stool up and put on their hands. Under the hats, their faces were stunned.
But then he turned back, to say a word of thanks to the executioner …
The small body lay on the scaffold where it had fallen; belly down, hands outstretched, it swam in a pool of crimson, the blood seeped between the the planks.
The phrase there are no rules to guide us involves the reader too.
I wonder which version people prefer?