Glorianny
I'm not very fond of portraits which don't show any background whatsoever, even a very minimum one. I have been looking and wondering why she didn't at least put in some evidence of a chair? And then I realised that had she done so the legs would look absolutely wrong. I also think it is more of a sketch than a portrait .
I think his left leg looks wrong, his thigh is too wide compared with his other leg - I noticed that before I studied his face, which doesn’t capture him.