Autumn

Confusion is one thing - deliberate rudeness, another.

Yes it was really bad I get confused

I think Berylmaudie's reaction was totally out of order and unwarranted. It is a lovely and sensitive piece of work Scarlet 21 - It is hard to publish something as personal as a poem on a public forum and insensitive and cruel to dismiss it as "bloody miserable"

Lovely poem Scarlet, I enjoyed it.

Thank you, Micelf, I appreciate your comments. The funny thing is that I was quite young when I wrote it - when you are 30 you feel you are very mature!

Scarlet, that is such a lovely reflection on life's journey. It actually recalls to me the words of Newman, 'a quiet end and peace at the last'. Not sad, but profound acceptance of the proper ending of a well lived life.

Thank you - I was not upset, just a little surprised.

No, don't get upset Scarlet I didn't read the essence of the thread correctly and your poem was lovely. My poem is not in the same league, but I was looking for something for my older grandson who is on half term this week and I remembered doing it at school. It's moved to the spider thread which is where it should have been in the first place.

Poetry threads are not the place for upset. Apologies

only a little bit. It was very nice.

I am sorry somebody found my poem 'bloody miserable' - perhaps I should not post any more as I usually get inspired by serious subjects. I had no objection to the spider poem, I just thought that a thread called 'Autumn' might attract some more poems about Autumn.

On the Spiders Thread.

Will repost then but on a more appropriate thread.

AKA I can"t read your poem as you have had it deleted , -- shame ! Was it a good one ? x

Why has that spider poem gone? I liked it. [ sad]

I do not think the spider one is about Halloween. Could aga explain that please. [ smile ]

I love them both!

I think the spider poem is very Autumnish. There are such a lot of spiders around in the Autumn.

The original poem was just a little bit bloody miserable. It was very poetic though. [smile}

OK I've reported my own post.

Please GNHQ will you delete my poem?

This is a sort of Halloween poem.

I hoped for some poems about Autumn, as it seems seasonal.

Message withdrawn at poster's request.

Thank you all - I am glad you like my poem.

Food for thought – in a wonderfully lyrical way.

Lovely.