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(79 Posts)
NfkDumpling Mon 23-Oct-17 20:05:31

I need a lesson from you educated clever people. On last nights Countryfile some school children wrote a 'poem'. Each thought up a descriptive sentence about nature. And this apparently was a poem. To me it was just a descriptive passage, a pleasant piece of prose. The only thing vaguely poem styled was that each sentence started on a new line. No scan, no rhyme, no balance. When is a poem a poem?

NfkDumpling Thu 02-Nov-17 09:19:12

This is lovely! I’m certainly moving on from “I Wish I’d Looked After Me Teeth”!

NfkDumpling Thu 02-Nov-17 09:19:43

(Not that I don’t still appreciate Pam)

Greyduster Thu 02-Nov-17 09:46:02

I have always loved Pam Ayers’ poems. ‘The Paraffin Man’, and ‘They should have asked my husband’.